The journal not only was a place for ideas but a place to work out the specifics. Teachers have a plan book to use if they want but I used my journal that way. As with anything else plans evolve to some extent as they roll out. Teachers read the success or failure of activities and make adjustments on the fly.
At this point in my career I had not made the shift away from published materials to more teacher facilitated and student choice of reading materials. Things were changing, however, and more authentic learning was creeping in. I planned a five-day cycle for reading. Notice how little student reading is actually happening?
On day one I planned to introduce vocabulary words and have students add them to their vocabulary folders and word banks. Then I would have the students do the Skill Pak and Studybook that went with the vocabulary.
Day two was the time to raise the student awareness of what they already knew (schema) about the story topic, introduce and assign the story. This would be the only real reading time during the week.
On day three I would lead the students to do a story map and questioning activities and a strategy called “deeper meaning.” I don’t remember what the latter was so it was not deep enough or, maybe, too deep for me? The lesson ended with a Skill Pak and Studybook assignment.
Day four included decoding activities (kind of irrelevant after the fact), more Skill Pak and Studybook pages, something called “Int. Rel. Act.” and Creativity pages. I don’t remember what the latter two were?
And, finally, on day five we checked everything and shared activities. Whew! Lots of workbook stuff!
The five-day cycle started all over again the next week. Frankly, I was bored with it and so were the students but I just didn’t know what else to do.
I tried to weave in sustained silent reading (SSR), teacher pupil conferences about books they were reading, and sustained silent writing (SSW). These were probably the most important things I could be doing and they were getting the least attention and often didn’t happen at all because there just wasn’t time.
The SIWP (Southeast Iowa Writing Project) had prompted a dissonance in me. A nagging feeling that things were not nearly as good as they could be. I began looking at everything with a critical eye and wondered why? Doing things in a way I had always done them or the way some publisher who has never met my kids didn’t seem legitimate.
Sunday, July 27, 2008
Sunday, July 20, 2008
Planning
My journal became a place to write down things I wanted to remember or try in my classroom. In various degrees of detail I planned many activities for the school year. In the August 20, 1982, entry I listed some things I wanted to do that year.
One was to contact the county conservation officer about my class adopting an area in the wild to visit and take care of. I did contact the guy and explained that my class was looking for a place they could take care of, clean up and utilize as an outdoor classroom. I thought there were a lot of lessons to be learned and if the kids did something like this they might be better stewards of the land as they grew up.
The guy was actually offended that I asked and said he had people who made their living doing these things and we would be taking work away from them. He said he really didn’t know of any spots where we could clean up trash or build small check dams. I was mystified.
Another idea was to have my mother come and work with my class several times on writing poetry and ultimately submit student writing to the Iowa Poetry contest. She did and we did. I don’t think I had any students who ended up being published in Lyrical Iowa but don’t remember for sure.
Another one was to try to develop a way of assessing student writing to use as a measure of growth. That was not an easy task and I don’t think I ever came up with anything concrete. I know the sheer volume of writing increased and I suspect the quality did too but didn’t come up with a good way to measure it.
I listed getting the Young People’s Column that I wrote about previously going and that did indeed happen as I explained in that piece.
I listed wanting to keep a daily journal to record happenings, ideas and experiences. Nearly an impossible task but I also planned to have a required journal writing time for the students and thought I could do my journaling during that time, too.
I also listed starting class promptly, reading stories regularly to my students, introducing and encouraging letter writing, utilizing oral reading and writing in the content areas, eliminating the use of the SRA kits, building on the student schemata (what they already knew).
I listed inviting people to come to my classroom and tell us stories, allowing five second think time after asking a question and after the student gave their answer, requiring each student to have a folder for new words, meanings, using it in context. Some other things I listed were utilize Readers Digest “Building Word power” for additional vocabulary building, use a word bank, have a word of the day, plug decoding skills into vocabulary, and there were many more.
Looking back at them now is fascinating. Many of them were successful activities that I used and refined for many years after first writing about them. Others just disappeared or were replaced with something else. Another time I will go into more detail on some of these.
One was to contact the county conservation officer about my class adopting an area in the wild to visit and take care of. I did contact the guy and explained that my class was looking for a place they could take care of, clean up and utilize as an outdoor classroom. I thought there were a lot of lessons to be learned and if the kids did something like this they might be better stewards of the land as they grew up.
The guy was actually offended that I asked and said he had people who made their living doing these things and we would be taking work away from them. He said he really didn’t know of any spots where we could clean up trash or build small check dams. I was mystified.
Another idea was to have my mother come and work with my class several times on writing poetry and ultimately submit student writing to the Iowa Poetry contest. She did and we did. I don’t think I had any students who ended up being published in Lyrical Iowa but don’t remember for sure.
Another one was to try to develop a way of assessing student writing to use as a measure of growth. That was not an easy task and I don’t think I ever came up with anything concrete. I know the sheer volume of writing increased and I suspect the quality did too but didn’t come up with a good way to measure it.
I listed getting the Young People’s Column that I wrote about previously going and that did indeed happen as I explained in that piece.
I listed wanting to keep a daily journal to record happenings, ideas and experiences. Nearly an impossible task but I also planned to have a required journal writing time for the students and thought I could do my journaling during that time, too.
I also listed starting class promptly, reading stories regularly to my students, introducing and encouraging letter writing, utilizing oral reading and writing in the content areas, eliminating the use of the SRA kits, building on the student schemata (what they already knew).
I listed inviting people to come to my classroom and tell us stories, allowing five second think time after asking a question and after the student gave their answer, requiring each student to have a folder for new words, meanings, using it in context. Some other things I listed were utilize Readers Digest “Building Word power” for additional vocabulary building, use a word bank, have a word of the day, plug decoding skills into vocabulary, and there were many more.
Looking back at them now is fascinating. Many of them were successful activities that I used and refined for many years after first writing about them. Others just disappeared or were replaced with something else. Another time I will go into more detail on some of these.
Sunday, July 13, 2008
Young Writer's Column
There is a notation from April 30, 1982, that I want to check with the Mt. Pleasant News about a young people’s column. Then on June 2, I note that I have approval from Roger Williams from the school district and Bill Epperheimer, editor of the newspaper, for a monthly column of children’s writing. Roger, Sue Wilson, a junior high teacher and Dave Brown, a high teacher agree to help with the selection of writing to be published.
The project lasted for three years. I saved every column in a folder and still have them. Each column begins with the introduction I wrote at the time:
The intent of this column is two-fold. First it offers the beginning author an audience larger than his/her teacher or immediate family. Young writers work hard if they know many people will be reading their writing. Second, readers have the opportunity to catch a brief glimpse inside the head of our young people.
The stories are often simple, but always refreshing. Reading these stories might remind you of your childhood or give you an opportunity to meet some of our young people in a new way.
From time to time throughout the school year we hope to publish student writing. It should be an enjoyable experience for both the reader and the writer.
I saw this as a way to inspire young writers, engage parents and the public, and generally raise the level of awareness about the power of writing. I, secretly, hoped teachers would start having students do more writing. Many of my colleagues were very open about not teaching writing or even allowing their students time to write. They just didn’t see it as important.
I knew if parents saw the writing of other children in the paper they would want to see their own children’s writing there, too. The parent pressure would ultimately produce more writing. The first column, published in the Mt. Pleasant News on November 18, 1982, had nine pieces of elementary student writing. It was a huge hit with parents and the general public.
The next month we published high school writing and then junior high writing in January and back to elementary writing in February. We had eight columns that first year.
As time went by it got harder and harder to get teachers to submit student writing. I felt guilty just using my own students’ writing all the time and pieces from the same few teachers who submitted them all the time. I was frustrated with many of my colleagues. For whatever reason some of them just refused to participate. Maybe it was jealousy over the success and attention of the project or maybe it was something else. I don’t know, but even some of my close colleagues refused to participate.
Sometimes teachers can be very narrow in focus. I can say that because I was that way to. It’s both good and bad. Good because they are deeply involved in what they are doing in their classrooms. Bad because they sometimes miss the forest for the trees.
Graduate school, teaching and other projects got in the way of continuing the project after three years. The newspaper wanted to continue, community members asked me about it, and the district administration supported it.
Gathering the pieces and organizing them took time. Even though teachers were supposed to submit them typed they seldom did so that was left to me. I urged teachers to continue submitting their student writing directly to the newspaper. That got me out of the middle. Some did for a while but eventually it disappeared.
The project lasted for three years. I saved every column in a folder and still have them. Each column begins with the introduction I wrote at the time:
The intent of this column is two-fold. First it offers the beginning author an audience larger than his/her teacher or immediate family. Young writers work hard if they know many people will be reading their writing. Second, readers have the opportunity to catch a brief glimpse inside the head of our young people.
The stories are often simple, but always refreshing. Reading these stories might remind you of your childhood or give you an opportunity to meet some of our young people in a new way.
From time to time throughout the school year we hope to publish student writing. It should be an enjoyable experience for both the reader and the writer.
I saw this as a way to inspire young writers, engage parents and the public, and generally raise the level of awareness about the power of writing. I, secretly, hoped teachers would start having students do more writing. Many of my colleagues were very open about not teaching writing or even allowing their students time to write. They just didn’t see it as important.
I knew if parents saw the writing of other children in the paper they would want to see their own children’s writing there, too. The parent pressure would ultimately produce more writing. The first column, published in the Mt. Pleasant News on November 18, 1982, had nine pieces of elementary student writing. It was a huge hit with parents and the general public.
The next month we published high school writing and then junior high writing in January and back to elementary writing in February. We had eight columns that first year.
As time went by it got harder and harder to get teachers to submit student writing. I felt guilty just using my own students’ writing all the time and pieces from the same few teachers who submitted them all the time. I was frustrated with many of my colleagues. For whatever reason some of them just refused to participate. Maybe it was jealousy over the success and attention of the project or maybe it was something else. I don’t know, but even some of my close colleagues refused to participate.
Sometimes teachers can be very narrow in focus. I can say that because I was that way to. It’s both good and bad. Good because they are deeply involved in what they are doing in their classrooms. Bad because they sometimes miss the forest for the trees.
Graduate school, teaching and other projects got in the way of continuing the project after three years. The newspaper wanted to continue, community members asked me about it, and the district administration supported it.
Gathering the pieces and organizing them took time. Even though teachers were supposed to submit them typed they seldom did so that was left to me. I urged teachers to continue submitting their student writing directly to the newspaper. That got me out of the middle. Some did for a while but eventually it disappeared.
Tuesday, July 08, 2008
Statistical Methods
Sooner or later every graduate student has to take the dreaded Statistical Methods. Many put it off until the end of their program and, I suppose, many never finish their program because they are afraid to take the class. Sometimes advisors suggest taking it early to see if you are up to snuff for the program or just so you have it out of the way and don’t have to worry about it. My advisor suggested I take it early I hope for the latter reason.
I had talked to many graduate students who had audited the class the first time they took it. We met one lady who had audited it four times. At stake was being able to stay in the program. Getting a “C” or below probably meant you would not get to complete the graduate program.
Larry McNabb, John Roederer, and I enrolled in the class in January of 1982. Our theory was that if we took it together and studied together we could get through. 1982 was a snowy winter and we missed the first class because the roads to Iowa City were drifted shut. The second Saturday morning we had the same problem. We were pretty discouraged! John dropped out because he thought we would be to far behind to catch up.
The third Saturday was a nice clear day. Larry and I drove to Iowa and walked all over the campus looking for the class with no success. At that point I was ready to drop out. Larry called the instructor during the week and explained our dilemma. I called him, too, and he encouraged both of us to continue in the class even though we had now missed three full morning sessions. The instructors name was H. D. Hoover and he was head of Iowa Tests of Basic Skills, an internationally famous man in the world of statistics and assessment.
So, we joined the class for the 4th session. Hoover was an extraordinary teacher! He was careful in his explanations and a great storyteller. Sometimes his stories were so engaging that is was easy to lose the statistic principal he was trying to illustrate with the story. I studied harder for this course than any I had taken before. I was determined to figure out the mysteries of statistics and sometimes read the assigned chapters in the book five or six times. I did every sample problem I could get my hands on.
Two more weeks into the class and we had our first test. It was tough. We were given a short break in the middle to go to the restroom and get a drink. There were many complaints about it in the restroom even though we weren’t supposed to talk about it. I went home feeling like I had done well on it but wasn’t sure.
We got the test back at the next class. I got an “A” and had the second highest score in the class. I was thrilled. Larry was down the list a ways with a “B” and a little disappointed. We went over the test in class and I was selected to explain how I got two of the problems correct since I was the only one in the group that did. I was honored and empowered! I was convinced I could handle this graduate college stuff!
I continued to do well even when the course got tougher. I scored well on the second and final tests and ended up with a “B” for the course. I was on my way!
I had talked to many graduate students who had audited the class the first time they took it. We met one lady who had audited it four times. At stake was being able to stay in the program. Getting a “C” or below probably meant you would not get to complete the graduate program.
Larry McNabb, John Roederer, and I enrolled in the class in January of 1982. Our theory was that if we took it together and studied together we could get through. 1982 was a snowy winter and we missed the first class because the roads to Iowa City were drifted shut. The second Saturday morning we had the same problem. We were pretty discouraged! John dropped out because he thought we would be to far behind to catch up.
The third Saturday was a nice clear day. Larry and I drove to Iowa and walked all over the campus looking for the class with no success. At that point I was ready to drop out. Larry called the instructor during the week and explained our dilemma. I called him, too, and he encouraged both of us to continue in the class even though we had now missed three full morning sessions. The instructors name was H. D. Hoover and he was head of Iowa Tests of Basic Skills, an internationally famous man in the world of statistics and assessment.
So, we joined the class for the 4th session. Hoover was an extraordinary teacher! He was careful in his explanations and a great storyteller. Sometimes his stories were so engaging that is was easy to lose the statistic principal he was trying to illustrate with the story. I studied harder for this course than any I had taken before. I was determined to figure out the mysteries of statistics and sometimes read the assigned chapters in the book five or six times. I did every sample problem I could get my hands on.
Two more weeks into the class and we had our first test. It was tough. We were given a short break in the middle to go to the restroom and get a drink. There were many complaints about it in the restroom even though we weren’t supposed to talk about it. I went home feeling like I had done well on it but wasn’t sure.
We got the test back at the next class. I got an “A” and had the second highest score in the class. I was thrilled. Larry was down the list a ways with a “B” and a little disappointed. We went over the test in class and I was selected to explain how I got two of the problems correct since I was the only one in the group that did. I was honored and empowered! I was convinced I could handle this graduate college stuff!
I continued to do well even when the course got tougher. I scored well on the second and final tests and ended up with a “B” for the course. I was on my way!
Sunday, June 29, 2008
More Poems and Prayers and Weird Things
“Hope is a little girl finding a bird’s egg and knowing it won’t hatch, but hoping that some way, some how, by some sort of miracle it will.”
I don’t know what inspired the above but I have believed in miracles for a long time. It’s really because I have lived them.
“Around about the dawn of man
There came a gentle rumble across the land
It grew and grew to strength untold
Then like a flower it did unfold
A gush of air, a bright light
Life exploded with all its might!”
Hmmm…
Some prose…
“There is a person inside myself that bounces from extreme to extreme of my mind. Oh, if only I could stay in the middle.”
And some poetry…
“Myself, inside me
Confined by conscience bound skull
Bouncing from extreme to extreme
Revealing the outer limits of personality
And seldom my real self.”
Entry from May 11, 1981 – “As we drove by IWC this morning bringing me to school, Becky said, “They get out of school pretty soon.” Heather (age 7 at the time) looked at the kids walking to class and said, “Get out of school? How early do they get up?” It was really funny but it kind of hurt Heather’s feelings when we all laughed.”
In the fall of 1981 I was thinking about ways to help my students remember what each punctuation mark is for. I considered having students in groups make giant copies of each mark and become experts on that particular mark and share what they knew with the rest of the class. Although I don’t remember for sure, I think we did that at least once.
What I do remember is that out of this idea the Punctuation Players evolved. I wrote a short play called “The Tragic Story of Penrod Period.” It was humorous play and each punctuation mark was a character in the play. My students did it every year until I left teaching. I still have videotapes of one or two of the productions.
In December of 1981 I wrote that a student brought enough lumps of coal that each student in my class could have one. It was near Christmas and someone had a reference to receiving a “lump of coal’ for Christmas and most of the students, to my surprise, had no idea what a lump of coal was. I don’t remember who the student was or where they had gotten the coal.
The last entries in the second journal are from January of 1982. I write that the weather has been cold, snowy and windy. One day it was 25 below zero. We missed the first two Mondays of January because of the snow.
That journal took me from Christmas of 1980 into January of 1982 so it was used just barely over a year. The quotes, original writing, thoughts, dreams and frustrations chronicle my life during that period. The germs of thoughts and ideas were started and beginning to evolve. Looking back now, knowing where those thoughts lead me makes reading the journal personally fascinating!
I don’t know what inspired the above but I have believed in miracles for a long time. It’s really because I have lived them.
“Around about the dawn of man
There came a gentle rumble across the land
It grew and grew to strength untold
Then like a flower it did unfold
A gush of air, a bright light
Life exploded with all its might!”
Hmmm…
Some prose…
“There is a person inside myself that bounces from extreme to extreme of my mind. Oh, if only I could stay in the middle.”
And some poetry…
“Myself, inside me
Confined by conscience bound skull
Bouncing from extreme to extreme
Revealing the outer limits of personality
And seldom my real self.”
Entry from May 11, 1981 – “As we drove by IWC this morning bringing me to school, Becky said, “They get out of school pretty soon.” Heather (age 7 at the time) looked at the kids walking to class and said, “Get out of school? How early do they get up?” It was really funny but it kind of hurt Heather’s feelings when we all laughed.”
In the fall of 1981 I was thinking about ways to help my students remember what each punctuation mark is for. I considered having students in groups make giant copies of each mark and become experts on that particular mark and share what they knew with the rest of the class. Although I don’t remember for sure, I think we did that at least once.
What I do remember is that out of this idea the Punctuation Players evolved. I wrote a short play called “The Tragic Story of Penrod Period.” It was humorous play and each punctuation mark was a character in the play. My students did it every year until I left teaching. I still have videotapes of one or two of the productions.
In December of 1981 I wrote that a student brought enough lumps of coal that each student in my class could have one. It was near Christmas and someone had a reference to receiving a “lump of coal’ for Christmas and most of the students, to my surprise, had no idea what a lump of coal was. I don’t remember who the student was or where they had gotten the coal.
The last entries in the second journal are from January of 1982. I write that the weather has been cold, snowy and windy. One day it was 25 below zero. We missed the first two Mondays of January because of the snow.
That journal took me from Christmas of 1980 into January of 1982 so it was used just barely over a year. The quotes, original writing, thoughts, dreams and frustrations chronicle my life during that period. The germs of thoughts and ideas were started and beginning to evolve. Looking back now, knowing where those thoughts lead me makes reading the journal personally fascinating!
Sunday, June 22, 2008
Renaissance
Participation in the Southeast Iowa Writing Project propelled me into many things. As I read that second journal I realize it is just churning with ideas. It was a time of a renaissance of my mind. I was reflecting on my teaching, writing letters, submitting articles, dreaming about going to graduate school and much more.
I had, up to that time, thought the graduate school option just wasn’t there for me. My academic record was not all that good and I didn’t typically do to well on tests. The Graduate Record Exam (GRE) was required for entry and the College of Education at the University of Iowa had high standards for acceptance. In those days they had a nationally highly respected program and graduates were considered the cream of the crop. I thought I would be naive to think that I could do well on the test let alone get in.
On March 27, 1981, I wrote: “I took the GRE last Saturday morning at Iowa City. I didn’t feel very good about it after I was done. I don’t think I did very well. I hope it’s not a major factor in my acceptance to graduate school. If it is, I suppose I will have to take it again.”
I filled out the application for graduate school and waited. On May 14, I received word that I was accepted at Iowa as a graduate student in the M.A. in education program. I was surprised and even thought they might have made a mistake. I originally wanted in the program because I wanted to take classes and that opened the door to that opportunity. Completing the program seemed too distant to even think about at first but slowly that dream crept into my head. Having an M.A. would open the door to more opportunities for our family and I liked the thought of being able to put M.A. after my name.
Iowa accepted most of the courses I had taken so that gave me a good start. My advisor was Dick Shepardson. He was a kind and generous fellow. He had great knowledge of classroom management and was an expert on cooperative learning. We discovered we had a lot in common. He had been an elementary teacher and was an avid arrowhead hunter. We became friends and even hunted arrowheads together one time. He was a strong supporter during my entire time at Iowa.
I also became friends with Jack Bagford. He was a professor in the department and specialized in the teaching of reading. He authored several books and was nationally know for his expertise. He, too, was an arrowhead hunter and joined us once when we hunted. I took a couple classes from him before I took any from Shepardson. I really became intrigued about the teaching of reading and couldn’t get enough of it.
I decided to make my focus general elementary education with an emphasis on reading. I didn’t think I would ever be a school administrator so I didn’t take any courses in that area until much later.
I had, up to that time, thought the graduate school option just wasn’t there for me. My academic record was not all that good and I didn’t typically do to well on tests. The Graduate Record Exam (GRE) was required for entry and the College of Education at the University of Iowa had high standards for acceptance. In those days they had a nationally highly respected program and graduates were considered the cream of the crop. I thought I would be naive to think that I could do well on the test let alone get in.
On March 27, 1981, I wrote: “I took the GRE last Saturday morning at Iowa City. I didn’t feel very good about it after I was done. I don’t think I did very well. I hope it’s not a major factor in my acceptance to graduate school. If it is, I suppose I will have to take it again.”
I filled out the application for graduate school and waited. On May 14, I received word that I was accepted at Iowa as a graduate student in the M.A. in education program. I was surprised and even thought they might have made a mistake. I originally wanted in the program because I wanted to take classes and that opened the door to that opportunity. Completing the program seemed too distant to even think about at first but slowly that dream crept into my head. Having an M.A. would open the door to more opportunities for our family and I liked the thought of being able to put M.A. after my name.
Iowa accepted most of the courses I had taken so that gave me a good start. My advisor was Dick Shepardson. He was a kind and generous fellow. He had great knowledge of classroom management and was an expert on cooperative learning. We discovered we had a lot in common. He had been an elementary teacher and was an avid arrowhead hunter. We became friends and even hunted arrowheads together one time. He was a strong supporter during my entire time at Iowa.
I also became friends with Jack Bagford. He was a professor in the department and specialized in the teaching of reading. He authored several books and was nationally know for his expertise. He, too, was an arrowhead hunter and joined us once when we hunted. I took a couple classes from him before I took any from Shepardson. I really became intrigued about the teaching of reading and couldn’t get enough of it.
I decided to make my focus general elementary education with an emphasis on reading. I didn’t think I would ever be a school administrator so I didn’t take any courses in that area until much later.
Sunday, June 15, 2008
Response
The overwhelming response I got to my letters asking authors to offer advice to young writers inspired me to write to others. What started out to be an inquiry to few suddenly involved many.
On of the things we learned about in the Southeast Iowa Writing Project (SWIP) was that the use of the red pen was counterproductive. It put a damper on writing and discouraged many to not write at all. SIWP suggested that in response to student writing you focus on what the writer was doing right and the time will come to work on polishing up what was wrong with the writing. Grammar and spelling could be taught in the context of the student’s writing.
Every writer longs for response to what they have written. They want to know that someone read it and agreed or disagreed with them, someone laughed, or someone cried when they read their writing. Absent the promise of some kind of response a lot of writing wouldn’t have happened. Oh, I am sure there are some exceptions. Writers may not want or expect response to their reflective journals but generally they do want it for almost everything else.
The response I was looking for when I wrote letters to authors was advice for my students and boy, did I get it! That prompted me to write to others and the collection was born. But, there was more! When I saw and felt how powerful letter writing was for me, how it made me want to write more, I realized it would work the same way for my students.
I began collecting addresses of sports teams and figures. I bought an address book full of the addresses of TV and movie stars. I collected addresses of politicians and public figures. The next step was to take the students through a lesson on letter writing emphasizing the form a letter takes and, of course, the importance of following all the rules so the reader is sure the get the writer’s message. Suddenly, spelling and the other rules had a real purpose. I let each person choose to whom they wanted to write. Everyone sent out one letter and we waited. It was not long before the magic began to happen!
With in a week or two students had received a reply. It worked like wild fire. Other students wanted a similar response. Hayden Fry wrote personal letters to everyone one who wrote him. George Raveling sent autographed posters of the Hawkeye basketball team. Dan Gable did the same. It was all from sports teams but I will say they were very responsive. Students wrote to authors of their favorite books.
They wrote to celebrities and others. Suddenly they were asking me for stamps almost everyday. I didn’t provide it until I had read the letter and looked over the envelope to make sure they were in good order. I had two students who wrote to presidential candidates and received good personal responses. George H. Bush actually read aloud one of the letters in a speech and another invited the student to a rally.
The bottom line is the kids were empowered to write by writing and response. The students could directly connect to writing for a purpose. Many students told me years afterward that they saved and cherished the responses they got. I did, too! My classes continued to write letters the rest of my years as a teacher. I gave presentations at conferences about the effectiveness of letter writing as a tool to get more writing from their students and increase their comprehension skills.
On of the things we learned about in the Southeast Iowa Writing Project (SWIP) was that the use of the red pen was counterproductive. It put a damper on writing and discouraged many to not write at all. SIWP suggested that in response to student writing you focus on what the writer was doing right and the time will come to work on polishing up what was wrong with the writing. Grammar and spelling could be taught in the context of the student’s writing.
Every writer longs for response to what they have written. They want to know that someone read it and agreed or disagreed with them, someone laughed, or someone cried when they read their writing. Absent the promise of some kind of response a lot of writing wouldn’t have happened. Oh, I am sure there are some exceptions. Writers may not want or expect response to their reflective journals but generally they do want it for almost everything else.
The response I was looking for when I wrote letters to authors was advice for my students and boy, did I get it! That prompted me to write to others and the collection was born. But, there was more! When I saw and felt how powerful letter writing was for me, how it made me want to write more, I realized it would work the same way for my students.
I began collecting addresses of sports teams and figures. I bought an address book full of the addresses of TV and movie stars. I collected addresses of politicians and public figures. The next step was to take the students through a lesson on letter writing emphasizing the form a letter takes and, of course, the importance of following all the rules so the reader is sure the get the writer’s message. Suddenly, spelling and the other rules had a real purpose. I let each person choose to whom they wanted to write. Everyone sent out one letter and we waited. It was not long before the magic began to happen!
With in a week or two students had received a reply. It worked like wild fire. Other students wanted a similar response. Hayden Fry wrote personal letters to everyone one who wrote him. George Raveling sent autographed posters of the Hawkeye basketball team. Dan Gable did the same. It was all from sports teams but I will say they were very responsive. Students wrote to authors of their favorite books.
They wrote to celebrities and others. Suddenly they were asking me for stamps almost everyday. I didn’t provide it until I had read the letter and looked over the envelope to make sure they were in good order. I had two students who wrote to presidential candidates and received good personal responses. George H. Bush actually read aloud one of the letters in a speech and another invited the student to a rally.
The bottom line is the kids were empowered to write by writing and response. The students could directly connect to writing for a purpose. Many students told me years afterward that they saved and cherished the responses they got. I did, too! My classes continued to write letters the rest of my years as a teacher. I gave presentations at conferences about the effectiveness of letter writing as a tool to get more writing from their students and increase their comprehension skills.
Sunday, June 08, 2008
Advice to Young Writers
Journaling prompted an abundance of ideas about teaching, professional growth, and several others areas. I am amazed as I go back and read about ideas I had that grew to something significant. It is interesting knowing how it turned out and how an idea or thought developed.
One of the most fascinating ideas is a collection of letters from over 200 writers offering their advice to my students. It was from a time when most writing instruction centered around grammar and spelling and very little on what the writer had to say. Those that pushed that approach believed that you couldn’t be a writer until you mastered all of the skills. The trouble with teaching writing was that the kids never got around to doing much writing because they were doing worksheet after worksheet on grammar or taking spelling tests.
Even though research did and continues to support the notion that there is no correlation between grammar skills and writing traditionalists insisted what should be taught. I wondered what real successful writers would say is important. Few mentioned grammar and not one mentioned spelling. I collected the letters and published them in a book I titled “Advice to Young Writers.” I gave away hundreds of them after I sold enough of them to pay for the printing. The area education agency was so impressed with it that they published it a second time at no cost to me.
What they did say ran counter to current thought. Things like “Read about what you don’t know and write about what you do,” came from the great writer Arthur Miller. That was the gist of many of the responses. Many of the writers focused on persistence and the need to do a lot of writing. Erma Bombeck said “Write and keep at it. Nothing is too puny or too small.”
Norman Bridwell offered, “ First, get the words and ideas down on paper as fast as you can. Then go back and polish the phrases, and check for spelling, punctuation and proper structure.” Many echo that basic theme! It is exactly the opposite of the way we were teaching kids to write. We had kids so paralyzed worrying about doing it right that they didn’t do it at all.
Beverly Cleary said, “The best advice I can give to young writers is to read, listen, observe, write and try to find your own voice instead of imitating the work of others.” Many others mentioned the importance of reading a lot. Annie Dillard said “don’t think of yourself as a writer, don’t think of yourself at all. Just read everything and learn everything about the world from books. The writing will take care of itself, if you read enough. Cheers!”
Some wrote long detailed responses. Some said very little and some said they were too busy or charged for their advice. Even today I am impressed with the response and should do more with them. That may end up being a project for me sometime in the future.
One of the most fascinating ideas is a collection of letters from over 200 writers offering their advice to my students. It was from a time when most writing instruction centered around grammar and spelling and very little on what the writer had to say. Those that pushed that approach believed that you couldn’t be a writer until you mastered all of the skills. The trouble with teaching writing was that the kids never got around to doing much writing because they were doing worksheet after worksheet on grammar or taking spelling tests.
Even though research did and continues to support the notion that there is no correlation between grammar skills and writing traditionalists insisted what should be taught. I wondered what real successful writers would say is important. Few mentioned grammar and not one mentioned spelling. I collected the letters and published them in a book I titled “Advice to Young Writers.” I gave away hundreds of them after I sold enough of them to pay for the printing. The area education agency was so impressed with it that they published it a second time at no cost to me.
What they did say ran counter to current thought. Things like “Read about what you don’t know and write about what you do,” came from the great writer Arthur Miller. That was the gist of many of the responses. Many of the writers focused on persistence and the need to do a lot of writing. Erma Bombeck said “Write and keep at it. Nothing is too puny or too small.”
Norman Bridwell offered, “ First, get the words and ideas down on paper as fast as you can. Then go back and polish the phrases, and check for spelling, punctuation and proper structure.” Many echo that basic theme! It is exactly the opposite of the way we were teaching kids to write. We had kids so paralyzed worrying about doing it right that they didn’t do it at all.
Beverly Cleary said, “The best advice I can give to young writers is to read, listen, observe, write and try to find your own voice instead of imitating the work of others.” Many others mentioned the importance of reading a lot. Annie Dillard said “don’t think of yourself as a writer, don’t think of yourself at all. Just read everything and learn everything about the world from books. The writing will take care of itself, if you read enough. Cheers!”
Some wrote long detailed responses. Some said very little and some said they were too busy or charged for their advice. Even today I am impressed with the response and should do more with them. That may end up being a project for me sometime in the future.
Sunday, June 01, 2008
Writing Class
I have met Gwendolyn Brooks twice. She was a great African American poet from Chicago. Her autograph, dated February 26, 1981, is inside the back cover of my second journal. Both times I met her at Iowa Wesleyan College.
The first time was in the chapel on campus. It was in the evening and I was one of very few Caucasians in attendance. After it was over I went to the stage to shake her hand. When I did she held onto my hand and looked me in the eye and said “Why are you here?” I said she was a great poet and I came to hear her. She said, “Langston Hughes is a great poet. I am just a writer.”
The second time I met her I was teaching a writing class through Southeastern Community College. The class usually met at the high school in my old English classroom. I am sure some of my former English teachers would have turned over in their graves if they had found out I was teaching a writing class. The evening Gwendolyn Brooks was reading at the Iowa Wesleyan College library we met there instead, and the class listened to her poetry. I loved it! I am not sure the class did?
The first time I taught the class with another person. After that I taught it own my own. That first time the guy teaching with me missed many of the classes and never came prepared. I figured after that that if I was going to do all the work I might as well get all the money so I taught it on my own. The other guy made it easy because he moved to Colorado.
I, too, struggled with the class. There are only so many activities you can do and then they need to get down to writing. No writing means no sharing and discussion, which translate into a boring two and a half hours.
I was always disappointed that some people would just show up and expect to be entertained the entire time. In a class like that the writing of the participants becomes the contents of the course.
I asked everyone to keep a journal. I assured them I would not collect them and never ask them to share anything they didn’t want to share. Sometimes I would give them long diatribes on why they should be writing things down. If they wanted to be a writer they had to write and one of the easy things was to write about what was going on in your life.
One participant was going through a bitter divorce and took my encouragement to heart. At the beginning of one session she told everyone about how many pages she had written in her journal and how cathartic it had been for her to get that stuff down on paper. Later, though, when I cautioned the group about no writing anything down they wouldn’t share with their mother or their children that same person opened her journal and tore out several pages.
The first time was in the chapel on campus. It was in the evening and I was one of very few Caucasians in attendance. After it was over I went to the stage to shake her hand. When I did she held onto my hand and looked me in the eye and said “Why are you here?” I said she was a great poet and I came to hear her. She said, “Langston Hughes is a great poet. I am just a writer.”
The second time I met her I was teaching a writing class through Southeastern Community College. The class usually met at the high school in my old English classroom. I am sure some of my former English teachers would have turned over in their graves if they had found out I was teaching a writing class. The evening Gwendolyn Brooks was reading at the Iowa Wesleyan College library we met there instead, and the class listened to her poetry. I loved it! I am not sure the class did?
The first time I taught the class with another person. After that I taught it own my own. That first time the guy teaching with me missed many of the classes and never came prepared. I figured after that that if I was going to do all the work I might as well get all the money so I taught it on my own. The other guy made it easy because he moved to Colorado.
I, too, struggled with the class. There are only so many activities you can do and then they need to get down to writing. No writing means no sharing and discussion, which translate into a boring two and a half hours.
I was always disappointed that some people would just show up and expect to be entertained the entire time. In a class like that the writing of the participants becomes the contents of the course.
I asked everyone to keep a journal. I assured them I would not collect them and never ask them to share anything they didn’t want to share. Sometimes I would give them long diatribes on why they should be writing things down. If they wanted to be a writer they had to write and one of the easy things was to write about what was going on in your life.
One participant was going through a bitter divorce and took my encouragement to heart. At the beginning of one session she told everyone about how many pages she had written in her journal and how cathartic it had been for her to get that stuff down on paper. Later, though, when I cautioned the group about no writing anything down they wouldn’t share with their mother or their children that same person opened her journal and tore out several pages.
Sunday, May 25, 2008
A New Journal
There is a magic to writing. It is something I have to do, need to do, want to do. I’m just not sure...I am not sure why it is? It has been that way for a long time. Maybe I inherited it from my mother? It could be that the story just must get out or it could be something else. So often I don't know where I am going when I start and that's the magic part. It just comes out. Robert Frost said, "I have never started a poem yet whose end I knew. Writing a poem is discovering." The fascinating part is that it wouldn't have come out, been magic, if I hadn’t starting writing in the first place. I often wonder how many things or great stories go untold for want of a writer to tell them?
I have always thought it amusing that so many experts spend so much time mulling over what they think the author might have been trying to say when the author didn’t know that himself/herself until after having written. What’s more important is what does the text mean to you?
Becky gave me a new journal for Christmas in 1980. My first one was full so it was perfect timing. It is full of interesting details about our lives in the early 1980s. Sometimes I clipped a newspaper article or wrote something on a loose piece of paper and stuck it between the pages of a journal. Coming upon them now as I read the older journals is a great discovery.
One of those pieces of paper in this journal has a list of the elements of writing on one side and on the other side an interesting musing:
“The songs and poems bring to mind a thousand thoughts as they pass by. I think I must rise out of a protected childhood. One rich with positive experiences and very little, if any, bad experience, at least as far as my home life is concerned. My parents accepted and encouraged me no matter how bad I did in school. Somehow, they instilled in me a sort of persistence that doesn’t recognize failure. It’s kind of a “not knowing when your beaten” attitude that has carried me through many experiences. As I look back on many of those experiences now I wonder why I just didn’t give up. The same attitude has probably gotten me in more trouble than I needed, too.”
I don’t know what led up to me making this personal discovery at that time, but I am glad I wrote about it. It seems very true for me, even today. That is not the case with everything I find in the old journals. I have clearly moved on from some things. I guess the goal of writing at anytime is to tell the truth, as you know it.
Writing is a forced meditation about a topic and I think it is through that meditation that the discoveries come. Reading is a meditation, too, but just not as intense. Your mind can actually wander when you are reading and still not miss much of the text. That is not true of writing. If your mind wanders when writing your writing usually wonders with it.
I have always thought it amusing that so many experts spend so much time mulling over what they think the author might have been trying to say when the author didn’t know that himself/herself until after having written. What’s more important is what does the text mean to you?
Becky gave me a new journal for Christmas in 1980. My first one was full so it was perfect timing. It is full of interesting details about our lives in the early 1980s. Sometimes I clipped a newspaper article or wrote something on a loose piece of paper and stuck it between the pages of a journal. Coming upon them now as I read the older journals is a great discovery.
One of those pieces of paper in this journal has a list of the elements of writing on one side and on the other side an interesting musing:
“The songs and poems bring to mind a thousand thoughts as they pass by. I think I must rise out of a protected childhood. One rich with positive experiences and very little, if any, bad experience, at least as far as my home life is concerned. My parents accepted and encouraged me no matter how bad I did in school. Somehow, they instilled in me a sort of persistence that doesn’t recognize failure. It’s kind of a “not knowing when your beaten” attitude that has carried me through many experiences. As I look back on many of those experiences now I wonder why I just didn’t give up. The same attitude has probably gotten me in more trouble than I needed, too.”
I don’t know what led up to me making this personal discovery at that time, but I am glad I wrote about it. It seems very true for me, even today. That is not the case with everything I find in the old journals. I have clearly moved on from some things. I guess the goal of writing at anytime is to tell the truth, as you know it.
Writing is a forced meditation about a topic and I think it is through that meditation that the discoveries come. Reading is a meditation, too, but just not as intense. Your mind can actually wander when you are reading and still not miss much of the text. That is not true of writing. If your mind wanders when writing your writing usually wonders with it.
Sunday, May 18, 2008
Finishing Up the First One
80s08 Finishing Up the First One
My journal entry of May 13, 1980, says I had my school physical and the doctor said I had high blood pressure. He also said I was an “extremely likely candidate for a double hernia." That was 28 years ago and I had bilateral hernia repair last August. Wish I would have had him do it then.
I am still in my first journal and need to move on to the rest of the 80s. It just means I am leaving out a lot and can come back and write about this stuff another time.
This first journal is full of reflections about my teaching and planning for next year. It ultimately had a tremendous impact on me as a teacher and as a person, I think, too.
I painted four houses that summer along with teaching junior high summer school. We continued to sell nightcrawlers and I took a three-week archeology course at Toolesboro. We camped there and one night there was a severe storm. We were lucky to get through it. We were in our camper and stayed dry but the other tents were torn out of the ground by the high wind.
Angie and Heather will remember that as a hot stormy summer. I am not sure whether they enjoyed the camping and archeology or not. My parents, Don Young, Claudia Streeter and a few others came to visit us during that dig. I found it very enjoyable and hope to do it again sometime. That course allowed me to advance to BA plus 15 on the district’s salary schedule.
That fall I taught a writing course at the minimum-security prison on Saturday mornings. When I read all the stuff I was doing I think I must have been nuts. By fall I was taking care of Ernie Hayes swimming pool, painting the trim on his house. I was still on the Hope Haven Board and on the Session at church.
That fall I did a session on writing across the curriculum at the state social studies conference in Des Moines. It got rave reviews and an article in the Iowa Department of Public Instruction Newsletter. I was thrilled! For several years after that I was quoted several times. The best compliment, though, came a few years later at an English conference when the presenter passed out my article as an excellent example of what can be done with writing across the curriculum.
Oh, yes, I was still teaching adult Sunday school and teaching full time and, believe it or not, driving a school bus from time to time. I drove it for my own field trips and for the district to transport teachers to the AEA Fall Conference in Burlington.
This journal is full of diatribes about issues that I thought were important, prayers about hopes and dreams and ordinary ramblings. It is hard to categorize much of it. I wonder what my children and grandchildren will make of it someday. No doubt, they will think I was a raving lunatic. Odds are I will be long gone by then so I guess it doesn’t matter.
You are nothing if not a story. It’s up to you how good that story is.
My journal entry of May 13, 1980, says I had my school physical and the doctor said I had high blood pressure. He also said I was an “extremely likely candidate for a double hernia." That was 28 years ago and I had bilateral hernia repair last August. Wish I would have had him do it then.
I am still in my first journal and need to move on to the rest of the 80s. It just means I am leaving out a lot and can come back and write about this stuff another time.
This first journal is full of reflections about my teaching and planning for next year. It ultimately had a tremendous impact on me as a teacher and as a person, I think, too.
I painted four houses that summer along with teaching junior high summer school. We continued to sell nightcrawlers and I took a three-week archeology course at Toolesboro. We camped there and one night there was a severe storm. We were lucky to get through it. We were in our camper and stayed dry but the other tents were torn out of the ground by the high wind.
Angie and Heather will remember that as a hot stormy summer. I am not sure whether they enjoyed the camping and archeology or not. My parents, Don Young, Claudia Streeter and a few others came to visit us during that dig. I found it very enjoyable and hope to do it again sometime. That course allowed me to advance to BA plus 15 on the district’s salary schedule.
That fall I taught a writing course at the minimum-security prison on Saturday mornings. When I read all the stuff I was doing I think I must have been nuts. By fall I was taking care of Ernie Hayes swimming pool, painting the trim on his house. I was still on the Hope Haven Board and on the Session at church.
That fall I did a session on writing across the curriculum at the state social studies conference in Des Moines. It got rave reviews and an article in the Iowa Department of Public Instruction Newsletter. I was thrilled! For several years after that I was quoted several times. The best compliment, though, came a few years later at an English conference when the presenter passed out my article as an excellent example of what can be done with writing across the curriculum.
Oh, yes, I was still teaching adult Sunday school and teaching full time and, believe it or not, driving a school bus from time to time. I drove it for my own field trips and for the district to transport teachers to the AEA Fall Conference in Burlington.
This journal is full of diatribes about issues that I thought were important, prayers about hopes and dreams and ordinary ramblings. It is hard to categorize much of it. I wonder what my children and grandchildren will make of it someday. No doubt, they will think I was a raving lunatic. Odds are I will be long gone by then so I guess it doesn’t matter.
You are nothing if not a story. It’s up to you how good that story is.
Sunday, May 11, 2008
Welcome Home Johnny
My February 16, 1980, journal entry makes a note that I should write about all the things that schools have taken over for parents and call it “Welcome Home Johnny.” I don’t recall exactly what led up to me thinking this was something to write about but I do remember thinking many times the parents and the general publics perception was that we should do everything for the kids.
The same problem is pervasive today. I remember hearing many people, even my parents commenting, “Why don’t they teach that in schools?” when someone came up short of what was expected of them. It could be anything from common courtesy to how to ride a bike, table manners, counting change, fire safety, or any of hundreds of other things. I remember feeling frustrated that it was impossible for teachers and schools to cover everything.
We added and continue to add things that need to be covered often, but nothing is ever taken away. Parents have abdicated much of their responsibility. We have to teach kids sex education because their parents don’t. The same is true with health education, nutrition, bicycle safety, stranger danger, how to behave in public, how to pay bills, and even how to wash their hands.
Every group from the National Rifle Association, to the Egg Producers (Also the pork, beef, turkey, and organic producers) to dentists, fire departments, police departments and every other group you can think of has their own curriculum they want taught in the schools. They are incredulous when we turn them down. They can’t understand why we wouldn’t want to take a few days and cover their pet topic. There is no denying that they may be important but there are only so many hours in the school day and the basic curriculum is difficult to cover in the time we have.
Even now a group that has something they want us to teach approaches me almost weekly. This week it was the fire department that wanted 6 days in the junior high program to teach a values based fire safety program and a Habitat for Humanity representative who wants the schools to teach a financial education program because he encounters so many people who don’t know anything about taking care of their money. Both are, no doubt, valuable but how could we ever work them in?
As a fourth grade teacher, I developed a systematic way of covering everything the district expected me to cover and documented it with a yearlong plan. I referred to it often to make sure I was about where I should be and then planned accordingly. It obviously annoyed me when things came up that disrupted that plan. Elementary people are schedule and clock driven and frustrated when things don’t play out the way they should. When I look at my old weekly lesson plans there are arrows all over the place indicating things forwarded to the next day or week. I tended to over plan most of the time.
If schools take over all the parent responsibilities maybe school is home for some kids?
The same problem is pervasive today. I remember hearing many people, even my parents commenting, “Why don’t they teach that in schools?” when someone came up short of what was expected of them. It could be anything from common courtesy to how to ride a bike, table manners, counting change, fire safety, or any of hundreds of other things. I remember feeling frustrated that it was impossible for teachers and schools to cover everything.
We added and continue to add things that need to be covered often, but nothing is ever taken away. Parents have abdicated much of their responsibility. We have to teach kids sex education because their parents don’t. The same is true with health education, nutrition, bicycle safety, stranger danger, how to behave in public, how to pay bills, and even how to wash their hands.
Every group from the National Rifle Association, to the Egg Producers (Also the pork, beef, turkey, and organic producers) to dentists, fire departments, police departments and every other group you can think of has their own curriculum they want taught in the schools. They are incredulous when we turn them down. They can’t understand why we wouldn’t want to take a few days and cover their pet topic. There is no denying that they may be important but there are only so many hours in the school day and the basic curriculum is difficult to cover in the time we have.
Even now a group that has something they want us to teach approaches me almost weekly. This week it was the fire department that wanted 6 days in the junior high program to teach a values based fire safety program and a Habitat for Humanity representative who wants the schools to teach a financial education program because he encounters so many people who don’t know anything about taking care of their money. Both are, no doubt, valuable but how could we ever work them in?
As a fourth grade teacher, I developed a systematic way of covering everything the district expected me to cover and documented it with a yearlong plan. I referred to it often to make sure I was about where I should be and then planned accordingly. It obviously annoyed me when things came up that disrupted that plan. Elementary people are schedule and clock driven and frustrated when things don’t play out the way they should. When I look at my old weekly lesson plans there are arrows all over the place indicating things forwarded to the next day or week. I tended to over plan most of the time.
If schools take over all the parent responsibilities maybe school is home for some kids?
Sunday, May 04, 2008
The First Few Months
There are things in the first journal I remember very well and there are others I don’t really remember. Some are so clear that it seems like they just happened yesterday and some seem to be from the ancient past. I occasionally come across things I have completely forgotten about as well as a few things I would like to forget.
My journal entry of December 6, 1979, says that my principal came to my room that day and said my top reading group was going too fast. I pointed out that they were scoring very high on all of the assessments and he agreed but suggested I do more of the extended activities with them. I only vaguely remember this but remember thinking it odd that I could get complaints when my kids were doing too well. I later discovered that the 5th grade teachers didn’t want us reading things that they wanted to cover in 5th grade so we should slow our kids down. Hmmmm…I still find that very strange!
His comments were followed by a pre-observation conference, his observation of me teaching, and the follow up conference after the observation are all in the journal, too. It was all very positive and I still have the documents related to it.
A journal entry shortly after that talks about how busy we are and how I plan to go deer hunting that weekend. In those days I hunted with my neighbor, Charlie Shappel and a group of guys. It was always interesting if not productive. It was during those days that it began to dawn on me how important storytelling was to everyday life. Just talk to a deer hunter if you want to find out what I mean. We hunted two days that weekend and bagged three deer on Sunday. I hoped to go back out on Wednesday. I don’t recall if that ever happened and there is no entry related to it.
Not long after that I wrote about being excited after being asked to do a district wide inservice on using writing in the classroom. I was elated about the opportunity to help other teachers recognize the power of writing as a teaching/learning tool. The same day I wrote about how I had students write directions to their homes from school. Many didn’t even know how to start. After they wrote them we tried to follow them on a big map. I shared mine first and quickly realized it needed some revision, too. All in all it was a rewarding experience that emphasized the importance of being specific and including details in our writing.
The last entry of 1979 tells about how busy Becky is getting ready for Christmas and wrapping up some Better Homes and Gardens parties and craft sales. I also comment on all the stuff she wanted me to do.
I was a new elder in the church at the time and was undergoing the elder training. I enjoyed the experience and felt I learned a lot.
My journal entry of December 6, 1979, says that my principal came to my room that day and said my top reading group was going too fast. I pointed out that they were scoring very high on all of the assessments and he agreed but suggested I do more of the extended activities with them. I only vaguely remember this but remember thinking it odd that I could get complaints when my kids were doing too well. I later discovered that the 5th grade teachers didn’t want us reading things that they wanted to cover in 5th grade so we should slow our kids down. Hmmmm…I still find that very strange!
His comments were followed by a pre-observation conference, his observation of me teaching, and the follow up conference after the observation are all in the journal, too. It was all very positive and I still have the documents related to it.
A journal entry shortly after that talks about how busy we are and how I plan to go deer hunting that weekend. In those days I hunted with my neighbor, Charlie Shappel and a group of guys. It was always interesting if not productive. It was during those days that it began to dawn on me how important storytelling was to everyday life. Just talk to a deer hunter if you want to find out what I mean. We hunted two days that weekend and bagged three deer on Sunday. I hoped to go back out on Wednesday. I don’t recall if that ever happened and there is no entry related to it.
Not long after that I wrote about being excited after being asked to do a district wide inservice on using writing in the classroom. I was elated about the opportunity to help other teachers recognize the power of writing as a teaching/learning tool. The same day I wrote about how I had students write directions to their homes from school. Many didn’t even know how to start. After they wrote them we tried to follow them on a big map. I shared mine first and quickly realized it needed some revision, too. All in all it was a rewarding experience that emphasized the importance of being specific and including details in our writing.
The last entry of 1979 tells about how busy Becky is getting ready for Christmas and wrapping up some Better Homes and Gardens parties and craft sales. I also comment on all the stuff she wanted me to do.
I was a new elder in the church at the time and was undergoing the elder training. I enjoyed the experience and felt I learned a lot.
Sunday, April 27, 2008
Finances
My journals reflect my mood and the struggles of life. As I read over the journal entries in the 1979-80 volume I see many references to the difficulties we had with finances. Sometimes those struggles brought on arguments and always frustrations. Some entries chronicle our desperation.
Our worm business and second jobs were prompted by the need for additional income. We also had to rely on bank loans or help from our parents. It is a painful part of life to learn to live within your resources. There were many sleepless nights and lots of prayers.
In reading the journal and reflecting back on it I think I was probably way too involved in other things and not focused enough on solving the problem. We just couldn’t seem to get over the hump. We would think we were doing well and then a car would break down and need to be fixed or replaced. If it wasn’t a car it was the furnace, stove, water heater or something else. We were just plunging deeper and deeper in debt.
If we could have just been able to put a couple thousand in a rainy day fund we would have been so much better able to get along. It is amazing that a small amount like that could make so much difference. Because we didn’t have that we had to rely on credit too often.
Somehow through all of the struggles we remained optimistic even when we had no idea how we would ever get out of the financial doldrums. I think this may be something that a lot of people go through but that doesn’t make it any easier.
Participating in the Southeast Iowa Writing Project (SIWP) set me on a journey that would ultimately lead to more financial security. It was a rocky road but it led me to take more classes, an expense, but that led me to teaching more classes and, of course that led to increased income.
In the spring of 1980, another SIWP participant and I taught an adult education course on writing for Southeastern Community College. It was an interesting experience that I will write about later, but it did provide some income. At the same time I was teaching that class I was also teaching a woodcarving class and taking a required human relations course. They occupied three nights a week. It was a busy schedule preparing for each of those!
On top of those that spring I was teaching adult Sunday school lessons each week, teaching the Red Cross Multi-Media course to groups, and serving on the church session and the board of directors at Hope Haven. Sometime around that time I took on the maintenance of Ernie Haye’s indoor pool. How I managed to do all of that and teach school and be a parent at the same time I don’t know? I couldn’t have possibly done many of them well.
If I had to do it over again I would be much more focused on my family and meeting our financial needs and less on the other stuff. We survived but it could have been a lot easier if I had been more focused on fewer things and devoted my time and energy to them.
Our worm business and second jobs were prompted by the need for additional income. We also had to rely on bank loans or help from our parents. It is a painful part of life to learn to live within your resources. There were many sleepless nights and lots of prayers.
In reading the journal and reflecting back on it I think I was probably way too involved in other things and not focused enough on solving the problem. We just couldn’t seem to get over the hump. We would think we were doing well and then a car would break down and need to be fixed or replaced. If it wasn’t a car it was the furnace, stove, water heater or something else. We were just plunging deeper and deeper in debt.
If we could have just been able to put a couple thousand in a rainy day fund we would have been so much better able to get along. It is amazing that a small amount like that could make so much difference. Because we didn’t have that we had to rely on credit too often.
Somehow through all of the struggles we remained optimistic even when we had no idea how we would ever get out of the financial doldrums. I think this may be something that a lot of people go through but that doesn’t make it any easier.
Participating in the Southeast Iowa Writing Project (SIWP) set me on a journey that would ultimately lead to more financial security. It was a rocky road but it led me to take more classes, an expense, but that led me to teaching more classes and, of course that led to increased income.
In the spring of 1980, another SIWP participant and I taught an adult education course on writing for Southeastern Community College. It was an interesting experience that I will write about later, but it did provide some income. At the same time I was teaching that class I was also teaching a woodcarving class and taking a required human relations course. They occupied three nights a week. It was a busy schedule preparing for each of those!
On top of those that spring I was teaching adult Sunday school lessons each week, teaching the Red Cross Multi-Media course to groups, and serving on the church session and the board of directors at Hope Haven. Sometime around that time I took on the maintenance of Ernie Haye’s indoor pool. How I managed to do all of that and teach school and be a parent at the same time I don’t know? I couldn’t have possibly done many of them well.
If I had to do it over again I would be much more focused on my family and meeting our financial needs and less on the other stuff. We survived but it could have been a lot easier if I had been more focused on fewer things and devoted my time and energy to them.
Sunday, April 20, 2008
Journal Lessons
My journals chronicle events and experiences that first year or so after I took the writing project. Reading some of them sometimes takes me back to the moment or experience as if it just happened yesterday. I am amazed by the experience and find it hard to pull myself away from the entries just the way it is when I read Dad’s journals.
One entry caught my interest especially after a conversation with Becky and Heather. It goes back to the fall of 1979 and happened in an unexpected way. I tell in this entry of helping a friend do some work on his acreage. We cut wood in his woods while Becky and his wife socialized and prepared a supper for us back at the house.
This friend had recently undergone a huge transformation in his life. He had been a “rounder” as my Dad would say. That simply meant he was running around a lot and not faithful in relationships with his wife and others. He “got religion” and was a different person. I was impressed with his change but not so impressed with the zealous way he tried to bring others to Jesus. Many of us had been there all along and were now wondering why he didn’t realize that.
He was several years older than I was. We had grown up in the same church as I had but it must have not meant much to him. His parents were friends with mine so even with the age difference we had a lot in common.
I was a little uncomfortable when he would brag about the things he did before he was “saved.” Somehow that just didn’t seem right. I wouldn’t say he actually regretted it. It was as though he thought his past life gave more credibility to his transformation. I thought he was wrong before and wasn’t sure he was totally legit now.
After the dinner the ladies had prepared for us we went out to the yard and played catch with one of his teenage sons. We each took turns going out for a long pass and snagging a difficult catch.
I was taken aback when the boy missed a long one and his Dad yelled out “woman!” in a very negative way. It happened every time the kid would miss a pass and then the son started calling his father a “woman” when he missed one. I was speechless! It was shockingly and blatantly sexiest. It was strong evidence that this cad was no more respectful of females than before.
To me, being Christian means that you have a profound respect for all God’s creation and using the word “woman” in a disrespectful way was a clear indication of his true colors. I don’t see that guy very often. I do believe he has grown as a person and a Christian since then but, somehow, I still don’t feel he is totally genuine. I guess it is not for me to judge.
One entry caught my interest especially after a conversation with Becky and Heather. It goes back to the fall of 1979 and happened in an unexpected way. I tell in this entry of helping a friend do some work on his acreage. We cut wood in his woods while Becky and his wife socialized and prepared a supper for us back at the house.
This friend had recently undergone a huge transformation in his life. He had been a “rounder” as my Dad would say. That simply meant he was running around a lot and not faithful in relationships with his wife and others. He “got religion” and was a different person. I was impressed with his change but not so impressed with the zealous way he tried to bring others to Jesus. Many of us had been there all along and were now wondering why he didn’t realize that.
He was several years older than I was. We had grown up in the same church as I had but it must have not meant much to him. His parents were friends with mine so even with the age difference we had a lot in common.
I was a little uncomfortable when he would brag about the things he did before he was “saved.” Somehow that just didn’t seem right. I wouldn’t say he actually regretted it. It was as though he thought his past life gave more credibility to his transformation. I thought he was wrong before and wasn’t sure he was totally legit now.
After the dinner the ladies had prepared for us we went out to the yard and played catch with one of his teenage sons. We each took turns going out for a long pass and snagging a difficult catch.
I was taken aback when the boy missed a long one and his Dad yelled out “woman!” in a very negative way. It happened every time the kid would miss a pass and then the son started calling his father a “woman” when he missed one. I was speechless! It was shockingly and blatantly sexiest. It was strong evidence that this cad was no more respectful of females than before.
To me, being Christian means that you have a profound respect for all God’s creation and using the word “woman” in a disrespectful way was a clear indication of his true colors. I don’t see that guy very often. I do believe he has grown as a person and a Christian since then but, somehow, I still don’t feel he is totally genuine. I guess it is not for me to judge.
Sunday, April 13, 2008
Journaling and Time Traveling
I still have all of the journals that I have filled up over the years. Reading them now transports me back to the time I wrote each one. I suddenly remember a lot of things I had totally forgotten about. It is both good and bad. There are some things you would rather not be reminded of but for the most part it’s good. In just the first three months of the first journal I kept I am astounded at all of the things we were doing.
In all begins around August of 1979. I was about to start my eighth year of teaching. Becky and I were in our 12th year of marriage. Angie was 11 years old and Heather was 6. We were active in their lives and our own.
I was writing about teaching a lot. It included both the preparation for lessons and units of study and reflections on how lessons went. The journal is where my first thoughts about students doing letter writing were formulated. I knew kids needed a reason to write and letter writing could be that reason and editing could be built right in. The bonus was that the kids could get a response from someone and that spurred them to write again.
In those first months I tell about directing traffic for the Police Reserve during Old Threshers. I wrote about Loretta’s visit at the same time. Taking the girls out to the event and working for the church youth group parking cars on the church grounds.
My house painting was finished for the summer with the exception of one job. It was painting a small porch on Mrs. Rockwell’s house south of town. I wrote about finishing up that job.
I wrote about Becky’s back porch craft business that was in full swing at that time. She was busy with that and also doing well doing Better Homes and Gardens parties at the same time. On top of that she was working at Lauser’s again and I was doing picture framing there, too.
I was on the board of directors at Hope Haven and served on the personnel sub committee. The latter required extra meetings at the time because we were firing the chief administrator. It was an ugly time there! I remember going to the administrator’s home with another board member and telling him he was fired and to not come in the next day. That was very hard but it had to be done.
At the same time all this was happening there was much more! I was doing a lot of woodcarving, we cleaned out our basement, we were selling fishing worms, and active in our church.
I was beginning the school year with a student teacher. His name was Bill McKenzie and he was about 6’8” and must have weighed 400 lbs. Having a student teacher was considerable more work than not and always took up a lot of time.
That early fall I was active in the Tri-Area Reading Council and helped shingle Virgil Trabert’s house.
How we found time to do all of this stuff I don’t know? There is a lot more to tell!
In all begins around August of 1979. I was about to start my eighth year of teaching. Becky and I were in our 12th year of marriage. Angie was 11 years old and Heather was 6. We were active in their lives and our own.
I was writing about teaching a lot. It included both the preparation for lessons and units of study and reflections on how lessons went. The journal is where my first thoughts about students doing letter writing were formulated. I knew kids needed a reason to write and letter writing could be that reason and editing could be built right in. The bonus was that the kids could get a response from someone and that spurred them to write again.
In those first months I tell about directing traffic for the Police Reserve during Old Threshers. I wrote about Loretta’s visit at the same time. Taking the girls out to the event and working for the church youth group parking cars on the church grounds.
My house painting was finished for the summer with the exception of one job. It was painting a small porch on Mrs. Rockwell’s house south of town. I wrote about finishing up that job.
I wrote about Becky’s back porch craft business that was in full swing at that time. She was busy with that and also doing well doing Better Homes and Gardens parties at the same time. On top of that she was working at Lauser’s again and I was doing picture framing there, too.
I was on the board of directors at Hope Haven and served on the personnel sub committee. The latter required extra meetings at the time because we were firing the chief administrator. It was an ugly time there! I remember going to the administrator’s home with another board member and telling him he was fired and to not come in the next day. That was very hard but it had to be done.
At the same time all this was happening there was much more! I was doing a lot of woodcarving, we cleaned out our basement, we were selling fishing worms, and active in our church.
I was beginning the school year with a student teacher. His name was Bill McKenzie and he was about 6’8” and must have weighed 400 lbs. Having a student teacher was considerable more work than not and always took up a lot of time.
That early fall I was active in the Tri-Area Reading Council and helped shingle Virgil Trabert’s house.
How we found time to do all of this stuff I don’t know? There is a lot more to tell!
Saturday, April 05, 2008
More On Writing
A couple months ago, near the end of the “Becoming a Better Teacher” series, I wrote about I told about my initial participation in what was then called the Southeast Iowa Writing Project. That was really only the beginning to the transformation I was to undergo as a teacher.
Lately, I have looked back in a folder that has many of the pieces I wrote during that time. They are pretty much horrible and I plan to destroy most of them after I finish this piece. Don’t worry you aren’t missing anything. I will keep the all of the journals I have written and there is plenty of lousy writing in them, too, but there are also little seeds of pieces, a turn of a phrase, or a provocative thought so they will still be around. Don’t take any of the journals too seriously, though.
I will describe a few of the pieces before they disappear. I do have to say that for me (a save everything guy) that it is hard for me to throw things away. That is not the case with these!
Included is a rambling treatise on my early thoughts about the class and hunting fossils. I don’t know why I went that direction but I did. Another is a short poem:
Yard Sale
Slightly used
Grown out of clothes
Shade less lamps
Some who-know?
A delicate teacup
Without a saucer…
Hmmm... Ok, I think I just ran out of ideas or energy on that one. There are some more attempts at poetry. None any better than this one.
The folder includes a hand written draft of the first major piece I wrote, Beautiful Big Thompson. It is about us being involved in the catastrophic flood in the Big Thompson Canyon during one of the summer trips. It still has all of the positive response to it that the members of the class wrote on the attached piece of paper. I’ll keep it for that reason.
There is a piece of paper titled “Random Thoughts.” Nothing much to them except maybe one thought, “Maybe we don’t write often enough to speak or speak often enough to write.”
There is an attempt at describing the experience of climbing Longs Peak and a rambling tongue in cheek piece about night crawlers. There is the mention that I should use letter writing in my classroom. I ended up doing that and had tremendous success! I’ll tell more about that later.
“And retreating to more tested ground, I have lost what I had found.” Don’t remember what I was thinking with that one?
More poems and prayers and promising ideas. And, finally, typed on a cut out piece of a paper grocery bag:
Confused by the complexities of the cornered conscience
I search and sort and tabulate
And again I cannot find the word that eludes my mind
And so I sort and calculate
And find the rhythms wrong.
So what? You say did you do next
To elevate the absurd?
I left out the word.
Maybe I should have left out a lot more words? I will tell you a little about journaling next time.
Lately, I have looked back in a folder that has many of the pieces I wrote during that time. They are pretty much horrible and I plan to destroy most of them after I finish this piece. Don’t worry you aren’t missing anything. I will keep the all of the journals I have written and there is plenty of lousy writing in them, too, but there are also little seeds of pieces, a turn of a phrase, or a provocative thought so they will still be around. Don’t take any of the journals too seriously, though.
I will describe a few of the pieces before they disappear. I do have to say that for me (a save everything guy) that it is hard for me to throw things away. That is not the case with these!
Included is a rambling treatise on my early thoughts about the class and hunting fossils. I don’t know why I went that direction but I did. Another is a short poem:
Yard Sale
Slightly used
Grown out of clothes
Shade less lamps
Some who-know?
A delicate teacup
Without a saucer…
Hmmm... Ok, I think I just ran out of ideas or energy on that one. There are some more attempts at poetry. None any better than this one.
The folder includes a hand written draft of the first major piece I wrote, Beautiful Big Thompson. It is about us being involved in the catastrophic flood in the Big Thompson Canyon during one of the summer trips. It still has all of the positive response to it that the members of the class wrote on the attached piece of paper. I’ll keep it for that reason.
There is a piece of paper titled “Random Thoughts.” Nothing much to them except maybe one thought, “Maybe we don’t write often enough to speak or speak often enough to write.”
There is an attempt at describing the experience of climbing Longs Peak and a rambling tongue in cheek piece about night crawlers. There is the mention that I should use letter writing in my classroom. I ended up doing that and had tremendous success! I’ll tell more about that later.
“And retreating to more tested ground, I have lost what I had found.” Don’t remember what I was thinking with that one?
More poems and prayers and promising ideas. And, finally, typed on a cut out piece of a paper grocery bag:
Confused by the complexities of the cornered conscience
I search and sort and tabulate
And again I cannot find the word that eludes my mind
And so I sort and calculate
And find the rhythms wrong.
So what? You say did you do next
To elevate the absurd?
I left out the word.
Maybe I should have left out a lot more words? I will tell you a little about journaling next time.
Sunday, March 30, 2008
Rides XII
At the southeast corner of the square we turn south for a block. On the left we first come to what was the site of David Jeffery’s home, harness shop and Pat Jeffery’s barbershop. Next are the Herman Newkum’s store, home, hotel, saloon and livery stable.
On the right would have been Taylor’s blacksmith shop. Next to it, and across the street from the Newkum Store, was the Goldsmith Store and home. Mr. Goldsmith had his own still and produced his own brand of whiskey.
We turn left and head east for a couple blocks. At the end of the first block on the right was the location of Joe Ross’s Boarding House and Dairy. Susie Hite Ross lived there. We Dad worked in Trenton he often went to her house for lunch. She told him many stories about the births. Dad said she was a kind and generous person who was very loyal to her friends. She was well known for helping out boys and girls who got in trouble.
The Methodist Church is on the right in the next block and then the location of Dr. Jay’s home and office. Later it was the location of John Deck’s home and blacksmith shop. Across the street north was Peter Hull’s blacksmith shop.
At the corner the building on the northeast part of the intersection is the Henry County Institute of Science. It was built in 1869 by George Miller and given to the people of Trenton. Miller died before the building was finished. The library on the second floor contained about 1200 volumes when it was discontinued in 1957. The first floor was used for public gatherings, elections, plays, and dances. The old records of the meetings state that they had trouble maintaining order at meetings and that in 1888 they purchased six spittoons from Goldsmith’s store for 35 cents each.
Dad and I entered this building once shortly before it was torn down. It was in bad shape by then and we were afraid to go upstairs because we thought it might fall in. It was clear, though, that this was a magnificent brick structure in its day. Dad had a picket from the wooden fence that had been around the building at one time and a brick from the structure itself. Both are still in the basement of my mother’s home.
We turn right and head south. On the immediate left is the location of Independence Square. It is the spot where our ancestor, Elder Joseph Goldsmith held the first Mennonite Church service in the home of Daniel Conard. The church was organized around 1852 or 1853.
We head south now out of Trenton. On the right we pass yet another home and office of one of Trenton’s early doctors. Then the big open area on the right owned by the Carpers for generations is the site of the only airplane landing in Trenton. A mail plane was forced to land there to make repairs. People from all over the area came to see it. It was fixed in a few hours and took off and then made one pass over the large crowd with an acknowledging dip of the wing.
In the open country now, we go down Brewster’s hill. Dad talks about how difficult it was for people to make it up the hill sometimes in the days when it was a mud road. On occasion, if nightfall came on, they had to spend the night at the Brewsters.
We head south on the blacktop past White Oak Church and cousin Russell’s house. We reach old highway 34 we turn left and head into Mt. Pleasant past the Country Club. This ride is over. We will go on a different ride another time. There are several others to tell about.
On the right would have been Taylor’s blacksmith shop. Next to it, and across the street from the Newkum Store, was the Goldsmith Store and home. Mr. Goldsmith had his own still and produced his own brand of whiskey.
We turn left and head east for a couple blocks. At the end of the first block on the right was the location of Joe Ross’s Boarding House and Dairy. Susie Hite Ross lived there. We Dad worked in Trenton he often went to her house for lunch. She told him many stories about the births. Dad said she was a kind and generous person who was very loyal to her friends. She was well known for helping out boys and girls who got in trouble.
The Methodist Church is on the right in the next block and then the location of Dr. Jay’s home and office. Later it was the location of John Deck’s home and blacksmith shop. Across the street north was Peter Hull’s blacksmith shop.
At the corner the building on the northeast part of the intersection is the Henry County Institute of Science. It was built in 1869 by George Miller and given to the people of Trenton. Miller died before the building was finished. The library on the second floor contained about 1200 volumes when it was discontinued in 1957. The first floor was used for public gatherings, elections, plays, and dances. The old records of the meetings state that they had trouble maintaining order at meetings and that in 1888 they purchased six spittoons from Goldsmith’s store for 35 cents each.
Dad and I entered this building once shortly before it was torn down. It was in bad shape by then and we were afraid to go upstairs because we thought it might fall in. It was clear, though, that this was a magnificent brick structure in its day. Dad had a picket from the wooden fence that had been around the building at one time and a brick from the structure itself. Both are still in the basement of my mother’s home.
We turn right and head south. On the immediate left is the location of Independence Square. It is the spot where our ancestor, Elder Joseph Goldsmith held the first Mennonite Church service in the home of Daniel Conard. The church was organized around 1852 or 1853.
We head south now out of Trenton. On the right we pass yet another home and office of one of Trenton’s early doctors. Then the big open area on the right owned by the Carpers for generations is the site of the only airplane landing in Trenton. A mail plane was forced to land there to make repairs. People from all over the area came to see it. It was fixed in a few hours and took off and then made one pass over the large crowd with an acknowledging dip of the wing.
In the open country now, we go down Brewster’s hill. Dad talks about how difficult it was for people to make it up the hill sometimes in the days when it was a mud road. On occasion, if nightfall came on, they had to spend the night at the Brewsters.
We head south on the blacktop past White Oak Church and cousin Russell’s house. We reach old highway 34 we turn left and head into Mt. Pleasant past the Country Club. This ride is over. We will go on a different ride another time. There are several others to tell about.
Sunday, March 23, 2008
Rides XI
As we get to Trenton we come to a church on the south side of the road. It is now called the United Missionary Church. Prior to 1947 it was a Mennonite Church. Dads family occasionally attended this church when he was a little boy. I think this building was actually moved onto this lot at one time but don’t know the details. Dad recalled attending a giant tent meeting on the grounds of the church and he remembered there being someone there that had a wonderful singing voice.
We turn right at the corner and head south into town. On the left we pass the location of the home of one of the many doctors that practiced in Trenton over the years. This was where Dr. Gilfillan lived and practiced in a building just south of the house
At the next corner on the right is the location of G.M. Noel’s hotel and later on was Dr. Long’s home. On the left across the street is the location of Wilson’s Cabinet Shop. Dad adds that the guy also made caskets.
Across the street south is the Trenton square. The first building on the right is Jacob Morrison’s Store. It was also the post office, a restaurant and a hotel. The building is still there and it’s easy to imagine what it might have been like in the early 1900s.
Next, on the right is the location of the Presbyterian Church. It was built in 1841 and was replaced by a large structure in 1868. It is all gone now and not even a memory except in the minds of historians.
The place just south of the church lot was Hiram Deck’s blacksmith shop. It was a prosperous business until horses were replaced with cars and then it eventually was a gas station for a while owned by Fred and Ed Burkey.
On the far southwest corner of the square was the Leeper home and a doctor lived in that home at one time, too. South across the street was the location of the first school in Trenton. It was a log cabin built in 1839 or 1840.
Across the street east on the south side of the square is Jim Ackles barber shop. Then we come to Frank Johnson’s store and home. Right next door to the east Mr. Johnson had a saloon. Dad says it was a pretty unsavory place. On the southwest corner of the square was the building used as a restaurant, yet another doctor’s office and a spot where a medicine show often set up and Dad even remembers them showing silent movies in a tent on this lot.
Across the street on the southeast side at one time there was a post office and a store. The store was built by John Morrow. He sold it to the Felgers. They operated it for a while and sold it to Sam and Stacy Carper. A couple owners later Fred Pulver owned it. I can remember when there was a Pulver’s sign on the side of the building. Dad says there was a livery stable just north of the store.
We turn right at the corner and head south into town. On the left we pass the location of the home of one of the many doctors that practiced in Trenton over the years. This was where Dr. Gilfillan lived and practiced in a building just south of the house
At the next corner on the right is the location of G.M. Noel’s hotel and later on was Dr. Long’s home. On the left across the street is the location of Wilson’s Cabinet Shop. Dad adds that the guy also made caskets.
Across the street south is the Trenton square. The first building on the right is Jacob Morrison’s Store. It was also the post office, a restaurant and a hotel. The building is still there and it’s easy to imagine what it might have been like in the early 1900s.
Next, on the right is the location of the Presbyterian Church. It was built in 1841 and was replaced by a large structure in 1868. It is all gone now and not even a memory except in the minds of historians.
The place just south of the church lot was Hiram Deck’s blacksmith shop. It was a prosperous business until horses were replaced with cars and then it eventually was a gas station for a while owned by Fred and Ed Burkey.
On the far southwest corner of the square was the Leeper home and a doctor lived in that home at one time, too. South across the street was the location of the first school in Trenton. It was a log cabin built in 1839 or 1840.
Across the street east on the south side of the square is Jim Ackles barber shop. Then we come to Frank Johnson’s store and home. Right next door to the east Mr. Johnson had a saloon. Dad says it was a pretty unsavory place. On the southwest corner of the square was the building used as a restaurant, yet another doctor’s office and a spot where a medicine show often set up and Dad even remembers them showing silent movies in a tent on this lot.
Across the street on the southeast side at one time there was a post office and a store. The store was built by John Morrow. He sold it to the Felgers. They operated it for a while and sold it to Sam and Stacy Carper. A couple owners later Fred Pulver owned it. I can remember when there was a Pulver’s sign on the side of the building. Dad says there was a livery stable just north of the store.
Sunday, March 16, 2008
Rides X
Merrimac had no church or cemeteries. For worship community members would have to go to Mt Ayr, Green Mound or one of the churches in Trenton. All of the churches in the area did use the easy river access at Merrimac for immersion baptisms from time to time. As our ride heads east we go up a long gradual hill. It is mostly made of sand deposited there over thousands of years.
A few miles down the road we come to Green Mound. The church is on the north side of the road and the cemetery is on the other. The white country church is a little larger than most and, I believe still has services. Dad has a three-ring notebook full of stories and history of all the old churches in the area.
Sometimes we stop here and walk through the cemetery just looking at stones and talking about the people who were there. My grandparents, Wilburn and Anna Ross are buried there along with uncles and one aunt. I am sure there are lots of cousins there, too.
One of our ancestors, John Stout, is buried here, too. It’s a simple small stone in the back of the cemetery. It’s significant because he is one of the very few Revolutionary solders buried in Henry County. The Daughters of the American Revolution (DAR) approached us at one time about the females of the family joining since they qualified but don’t think Loretta or Nancy ever did. I guess our daughters and granddaughters could join if they ever wanted too. It was a status symbol at one time to be a member but I haven’t heard much about them for along time.
This is where the boy, David Zear, is buried. He was the one who died in the horrible accident in the mill at Merrimac. We stop at his broken stone and think of what horror he must have felt in those last moments. We send up a prayer for his soul and move on.
We pass the graves of the small children who were victims of diphtheria and wonder how things might have been different had they survived. We pass the graves of the children from the family that allegedly was cursed by the Merrimac Witch and think of how superstitious people can be.
It seems like Dad has known many of the people here. I ask him if he would want to be buried here and to my surprise he says no. He says all of his friends are in Mt. Pleasant and besides him and Mom have already paid for a spot there. Then he says he’d rather not think about stuff like that, anyway.
We walk back to the car and head east toward Trenton. Just west of town he points to a small grove of trees on the right and says that’s Ben’s thicket. It was much larger years ago. Dad says it was a congregating spot years ago for many of the men of Trenton. It is where they went to smoke, drink and gamble. He has many stories about that spot although he says he was never personally there.
Trenton is the next stop.
A few miles down the road we come to Green Mound. The church is on the north side of the road and the cemetery is on the other. The white country church is a little larger than most and, I believe still has services. Dad has a three-ring notebook full of stories and history of all the old churches in the area.
Sometimes we stop here and walk through the cemetery just looking at stones and talking about the people who were there. My grandparents, Wilburn and Anna Ross are buried there along with uncles and one aunt. I am sure there are lots of cousins there, too.
One of our ancestors, John Stout, is buried here, too. It’s a simple small stone in the back of the cemetery. It’s significant because he is one of the very few Revolutionary solders buried in Henry County. The Daughters of the American Revolution (DAR) approached us at one time about the females of the family joining since they qualified but don’t think Loretta or Nancy ever did. I guess our daughters and granddaughters could join if they ever wanted too. It was a status symbol at one time to be a member but I haven’t heard much about them for along time.
This is where the boy, David Zear, is buried. He was the one who died in the horrible accident in the mill at Merrimac. We stop at his broken stone and think of what horror he must have felt in those last moments. We send up a prayer for his soul and move on.
We pass the graves of the small children who were victims of diphtheria and wonder how things might have been different had they survived. We pass the graves of the children from the family that allegedly was cursed by the Merrimac Witch and think of how superstitious people can be.
It seems like Dad has known many of the people here. I ask him if he would want to be buried here and to my surprise he says no. He says all of his friends are in Mt. Pleasant and besides him and Mom have already paid for a spot there. Then he says he’d rather not think about stuff like that, anyway.
We walk back to the car and head east toward Trenton. Just west of town he points to a small grove of trees on the right and says that’s Ben’s thicket. It was much larger years ago. Dad says it was a congregating spot years ago for many of the men of Trenton. It is where they went to smoke, drink and gamble. He has many stories about that spot although he says he was never personally there.
Trenton is the next stop.
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